Gustav The Goldfish; written & illustrated by Theodor Seuss Giesel, Redbook Magazine; June 1950.
A Fish Out Of Water, written by Helen Palmer, illustrated by P.D. Eastman; Beginner Books, 1961 (Childrens Picturebook Price Guide: $240 VG+).
Prologue
As a child, I loved the story A Fish Out Of Water. It was, and remains, one of my favorite Beginner Books. Written by Helen Palmer, the wife of Theodor Seuss Geisel, aka Dr. Seuss, A Fish Out Of Water has a “preposterous-ness’ one associates with a Dr. Seuss story. Then it’s not surprising to discover the story is virtually identical to Seuss’s Gustav The Goldfish, which was published a decade earlier in the June 1950 Redbook Magazine!
“[Seuss] gave Helen formal permission to write a Beginner Book from “Gustave the Goldfish,” which he had written in 1950 in his long-running series of children’s stories for Redbook. “you have the right to use any of the situations of any of the words from the original story that your little heart desires. You must, however, comply with all the necessary steps in protecting my original copyright.[1]”
For fifty-seven years, Gustav The Goldfish, written and illustrated Dr. Seuss, has not seen the light of day [2].
One Story, Two Fish
The story lines are identical. Both books start with a boy buying a fish, with the seller providing a curious warning not to over feed the fish.
Fish/Water: “When you feed a fish, |
Gustav: “Just feed him a spot. If you feed him a lot Gus had to have food. Not a spot. But a lot! |
In A Fish Out Of Water, the boy also dumped the entire box of fish food into the tank.
Fish/Water: “Then something DID happen. |
In Gustav: But the second I did it, I saw I’d done wrong, |
Next, in both stories, Gus and Otto were put into a larger container, a flower bowl, and proceeded to out grow the bowl.
Next, in both stories, Gus and Otto were brought into the kitchen and moved from pot to pot to bigger pot.
Next, in both stories. Gus and Otto were taken upstairs to the bathtub.
Next, In both stories, the tub overflows, as Gus and Otto continue to grow, and the fish ends up in the flooded cellar of the house.
Next, at last, we have some divergence. In A Fish Out Of Water, the boy calls a policeman, then firemen to help move Otto out of the cellar and into a community swimming pool.
Next, in both stories, the boy telephones the seller of the fish, and asks for his assistance.
From Fish/Water: “So you fed him too much! |
From Gustav: “I knew,” sighed the man, “this would happen one day!” |
Next, in both stories, the original seller of the fish arrives, fiddles with some items, then goes underwater for some amount of time.
Then up jumped Mr. Carp. |
And he took it down cellar and worked under water |
Gustav The Goldfish is a Dr. Seuss story, with his familiar rollicking cadence, anapestic tetrameter, a signature of his poems. In the introduction to Gustav, Seuss writes
“This is the tale of a goldfish that grew,
Presented to you with a technique that’s new.
To get best results, just read it aloud,
To your youngsters and friends and the rest of the crowd.“